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A moment passed, then another, before a dark shadow launched into the air. The shadowy figure hung for moments, a dark blotch against the blue-black sky, before plummeting down. Somersaulting ...

Jennafina. She is obssessed with it here, and gushes on and on, and then I decided to join too, and see what all the gushing was about.

Usually, I only wear some lip balm or gloss from The Body Shop, and tons of black or green eyeliner and mascara. I don't know why... But I think I ...

1/10 I can't speak anything but English, some French, and I'm excellent in Espanol. With a tilda. Only I don't know how to make a tilda on the computer. Or ...

Okay, although... a. No one knows who I am on this board b. I'm utterly hideous... -shudder- I've decided to post this pic here. And also, My makeup was already ...

Woo, you really need to work on your grammar. my love is gone and i feel he was a rat. This seems too... obvious for poetry. Too blunt. I'm sure ...

That is a really good poem. You might have accidently used bad capitalization or you might have done it on purpose. Otherwise, yeah, the flow is excellent, and the rhyming... ...

It looks really... different from the original drawing, but I still like it :D

Hahaha, that's really cute! I don't suppose it really needs any critiquing, because it's not done by a member of this site. But, laughed and barfed don't rhyme.

It's a sweet poem, but it's a little random, you could flesh it out, and make it even sweeter

7/10 A little too... phiolosophical for me.

Ohmygod, I can completely imagine you reading this out loud. It's really... good. :D It's cold outside. Now that was an interesting line. I like how you used it twice, ...

Ooooh, not only will tis be fun, but I can make sure my characters have FLAWS! That's really helpful. If there is one thing that annoys me, it's how some ...

That's really... Simple, but, I somehow like it. I espeically like how you emphasized the eight mintues...

It's cute, but very... plain, like straightforward. Poetry is more interest when it's less simple, and really mkes you think. This sounds almost liike a cheesy pop song, I think ...